If I will ever see you again what would I say?
Would I say how are you and greet you with a smile?
Would you smile back and ask in return how I am?
Or we will pretend we don’t know each other and we would just walk by?
If I will ever see you again would I feel just the same?
The time that I first saw you in that fateful day
A day that is fateful and makes you cry inside
If only it didn’t happen would be the best for us
If I will ever see you again would you love me still?
Would you still say I’m your wonderful greatest sin?
The one you will never regret committed in your life
Because I am and will always be your one and only love?
If I will see you again would I dare to repeat
The words that I told you just before I turned and left
I said I will be be back only I don’t know when
But if your, our love is strong enough I’ll find you there waiting
If I will ever see you again would it be different
We don’t have to say farewell simply because we must
Would we have the chance to be together at last
This time you would not be my nephew and I would not be your aunt…
Pow! I did not expect that ending. No Siree not at all!
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Thanks Jacq.
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Finally, a positive trace. I liked your poem so much
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Ha, ha ha! So, that is how it’s done 🙂
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You caught me.:)
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🙂
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Do pay a visit to my poem, if time allows.
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Heading there…
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Thanks so much.:)
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Just a little motivation: https://27writers.wordpress.com/2015/12/01/not-so-abstract-motivational-thoughts/
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What a twist! Brilliant😊
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Thanks M. 🙂
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You’re very welcome😊. Really enjoyed reading it and the final stanza just blew my mind😊
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Nothing better than the simple truth.
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Always 😉
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There is sadness, and there is a bright side in your poem too. Let me wish you all the happiness in this world and the next, for you have suffered it is true. Merry Christmas and a happy new Year 2016. 🙂
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Merry Christmas and a prosperous New Year to you and yours. May always have all the blessings you deserved. Take care.
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Pow! What a poem! There’s an entire epic in there, waiting to be written into fiction. And that last line floored me!
Well-done!
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And it is non-fiction 🙂 Every single little detail.
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🙂
I was being delicate, and didn’t want to pry.
Well, my dear, your life is a mystery with no end.
I know you’ve suffered, but if you can turn it into poetry, then something good comes out of it.
Loved meeting you here, and hope to see you around.
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I like your subtle manner of probing 😀 Just kidding. I am fortunate to know a talented writer and poet as you are. My gain.
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Thanks! And the feeling is mutual.
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🙂
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Ouch! what a fate! Didn’t expect that twist in the end. Well written.
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Thank you very much!
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wow what a twist! this line is so right: “We don’t have to say farewell simply because we must.” Yet as your poem makes clear, we often say it and then regret it.
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I wrote this story few times already. First it was a book. Then an essay, now a poem.
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Next a song maybe? 😉
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Ha, ha ha! A song is nothing but a poem with music.
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so what kind of music would you set it to 😉
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What I want (Aida, Carmen…) and what suits the poem (country, ballad…) are two different things. I’ll go for something in between. Slow rock or even rap:D
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no aria? 😉
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That’s a good idea. I chapter of a bigger story. In fact, that’s really an excellent idea.
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It’s an opera worthy idea 😉
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Tragedy. Always good for stories.
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Yes it is!
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btw
I have a trouble linking to wordpress challenges. My links don’t work. It’s a de ja vu from earlier year when I could not link to anything most of the times. It’s only these last couple of months that I can then it happened again.
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You should ask the happiness engineers about that. This sounds like a glitch.
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I asked and had long talks with them in the past including Ben and Michelle.
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Oh and noting came of it I guess. How strange.
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Ben apologized to me yesterday and vowed to do something about it. I appreciate the gesture.
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Maybe he’ll find a fix. Fingers crossed!
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They did for a while but… Let’s wait and see.
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Good plan 🙂
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Excellent job on this. 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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I like your poem 🙂 intriguing!
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What can I say… it was not a mistake for I (we) knew what we were doing. I don’t regret it either but wrong is wrong no matter which side you look at it.
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