Wow! This is hard, DP challenge wants us to write a story using one-syllable words only. But hard is what I like (who doesn’t?) and crave so, I’ll give it a try. Ready? Here we go…
I thought that falling in love with a friend is a just fairy tale. The thought of waking up one day and found out that you have fallen for a person you have known for years seemed strange to me. I think that either you are dazzled by him at first sight or not. You would not all of a sudden have some kind of “feelings” towards a person who doesn’t “attract” you in the first place. This I believed all my life till I met Don.
I have known him for more than eight years and never had a single talk with him aside from the usual hi and hello. I never saw him as the one. He’s not my type. I never noticed him in fact.
Then fate brought us closer and I found out what a fine person he is. I well-nigh fall for the guy. If the case had been not what it was… given the right amount of time… it could have been magic. But__ it could be also that I was just sad at that time and want some care and warmth, I don’t know…
He is married now and has kids. Prior to his union, he tried to change my mind about us but no can do. Too heavy a load to carry, too tough to make it happen in real life. A risk I am not so keen to take…
How did I do? I hope I did some justice to the challenge 🙂
Seems like this story is about “the one that got away” which is fine. I just couldn’t help noticing all the multiple-syllable words. ? ? ? 🙂
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okay I will kill them right away 🙂 thanks for pointing them out to me.
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A lovely piece of what seems real? X
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a butchered piece to fit the challenge 🙂 of a real experience. boy, i omitted chunks in purpose. someday i might tell the whole story 😉
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I wait with baited breath
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i can say the same waiting for your promise of a sequel of your dark stories there 😉
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Oh but part 3 was posted yesterday did you miss it? X
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i’m heading there ASAP!
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Yay hopedully you got part 2 also? 🙂
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I save it for tomorrow. something to look forward to 🙂
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yay perhaps with a cup of tea or mug of coffee for tea time? 😀
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I will be there promise.
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I save it for tomorrow. something to look forward to 🙂
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I am having a tea party today (its open for a week and a half) will you join me? grins..I am sure you would bring some photographic delight to the event
http://eclecticoddsnsods.com/2014/12/09/tea-time-1/
Justine xx
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Gladly! I will head on there to check what everyone is wearing 🙂 thanks for the invitation.
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a pleasure xx
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