“Bedroom isn’t the right place to explore with him, unless… you’re very, very desperate… I’m leaving today. I can’t take it anymore. Sorry mother.”
I folded the small paper that was stuck under my shoe. Found it accidentally when I crossed my legs to lessen the cramp I was feeling sitting on a train for quite some time. How long it had been there? Where I had steeped on it? I looked around; everyone was busy with their business. Nobody noticed. I gazed outside the window.
The train stopped. I reached my destination. I left the note folded on the table.
I could have written it. I muttered to myself.
Reply to Writing 101: Be Brief
Reply To Daily Prompt: Brevity
The way you turn the piece around at the end, I don’t know. I just love it.
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it was an afterthought.
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That was quite good. You nailed it. Well done
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thank you! glad i made it.
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this was a tough challenge and I think you accomplished it admirably. I got a whole story out of this very brief post. Thanks for sharing.
-JK
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you’re welcome. it’s always nice to know that someone could appreciate one’s effort. thank you.
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Good job!
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thanks!
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ouch
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🙂
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Sweetly and neatly done. I wonder what the next person would make of the note apparently left by you?
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no, not me but it could have been…
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So funny! This was great. Reading for inspiration. My letter was terrible, but thankfully not published yet. 🙂
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you’ll get there. we all have our moments…
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I went for funny. Think it turned out okay. 🙂
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it was a refreshing approach. quite original.
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A nice little flash piece, Well done.
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thank you! come again when you have some time to spare 🙂
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From this entry in your blog, I feel as if I want to read more about what is going on.
Great job hitting two prompts at once. 🙂
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thank you! now, i feel that i’ve done my work and conveyed the message successfully.
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